Please write a paragraph (6-10 sentences) about your ideal husband, wife, or friend. Use as many adjective clauses as possible.
Example: My ideal husband is someone whom I can confide in
when I have troubles. He is the man who will stay with me forever,
even when I get old, fat, and sick.
An ideal friend is someone to whom I can talk to about anything, no matter what the subject is, a person who is always there for me , he should be next to me in situations which are critical for me and which can be dangerous for me . An ideal friend is someone with whom I can laugh, hang out and be happy with. Moreover he should be someone who listens, opens his hart, and advise me whenever I’m wrong.
ReplyDeleteDon't repeat prepositions:
DeleteAn ideal friend is someone to whom I can talk about anything... someone with whom I can laugh, hang out and be happy.
NICE :D
Thank you holly i will make sure not to do this mistake again
DeleteMy ideal wife is someone whom i can trust and talk with whenever i feel the need to, a person who understands what im thinking about without me having to elaborate and someone who is always there beside me. A wife should be the person whom i would turn to whenever i need to be calmed down and need a shoulder to lean on.
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful.
DeleteMy ideal husband is someone who loves me for who I am. He is the man who may not remember to celebrate the day when we first meet, or give me flowers on Valentine's Day, but he is the one whom I can always expect to buy me ice cream when I feel sad, take me to shopping stores where he hates the most to let me choose my birthday gifts, and play crosswords with me at weekends. I won't ask my man to make the promise of loving me forever, which is too good to be true, but I hope that he will treasure every moments we share, and never ever take my love for granted. My ideal husband is someone whom I have enough confident to take good care of. He will be the man, the only man, who can make me become his ideal wife.
ReplyDeletestores WHICH he hates
DeleteYou can make him promise to love you forever if he doesn't do it on his own as he is supposed to ;)
My ideal husband is someone who is rich enough to give me his unlimited credit card for shopping. He is the man who is always helpful to carry the bags after shopping and to do houseworks instead of me. My ideal husband who should be handsome and never want me to cook for him, even he is diying because of starving. He is the man whom always understand the truths before I tell. The man who is a candidate to be my husband should be as intelligent as me and have sense of humor to make me laugh when I am in trouble.
ReplyDeleteMy ideal husband IS SOMEONE who should be handsome and never want me to cook for him, even IF he is dying FROM STARVATION.
DeleteHe is the man whom always understand the truths before I tell.
DO YOU SEE YOUR MISTAKE?
I think it will be difficult to find a man WHO IS as intelligent as you, Irem, but I wish you luck in trying!
From my point of view, an ideal spouse who should be responsible respects me and my family. In daily life, my husband, whom I tell my secrets, I can get support whenever I'm in trouble. In addition, he should respect my relationship with others whom I have to work and meet at the company. Next, he should listen to my idea when we have dispute. If I say something bad, he shouldn't get angry with me, he should talk to me very calm and show me the way to fix our trouble. I think my spouse, who can share household, take care my family and be my motivation, always has high responsibility to his family.
ReplyDeletean ideal spouse IS SOMEONE WHO should be responsible AND respect me...
Delete...my husband, TO WHOM I will tell my secrets. WILL GIVE ME support whenever I'm in trouble.
others WITH whom I have to work
Please correct the last sentence.
I think the best spouse who always has high responsibility to his family.
DeleteI think the best spouse IS SOMEONE who always takes responsibility for his family.
DeleteMy ideal wife is someone whom I can be completely open. She is the girl who I can always count on, when I am having a hard time. My ideal wife is the person whom I am completely in love, and with whom I want to spend the rest of my life. She is the one who stole my heart since the moment I saw her. She is not just my partner and confident but she also is my friend, whom I can share my deepest fears. Finally, my lovely wife is the girl who will always correct my mistake in order to make me a better person and no matter what happen she will always loves me.
ReplyDeletesomeone WITH WHOM I can be completely open.
DeleteOR someone WHOM I can be completely open WITH.
WITH WHOM I am completely in love
OR I am completely in love WITH
WITH WHOM I can share my deepest fears
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My ideal friend is someone who accept me how I am and if I am acting in the wrong way, she tell me. She is the friend who listen me when I have some troubles even give me some advice. Also, She share the same things like places to go, desserts, foods, music, hobbies, etc., so we can do interesting and funny things together. Not envious of my success. Instead, she rejoices in my success as her own. Finally, she should be a optimistic person looking always the best face above all in bad circumstances. I think the most important is she is with me not only in good moments but also in bad moments.
ReplyDeletesomeone who ACCEPTS me
Deleteshe TELLS me
who LISTENS TO me... and even GIVES me some advice.
she SHARES
FUN things together (not funny)
Not envious of my success, instead she rejoices in my success as her own.
BEAUTIFUL SENTENCE!
an optimistic person WHO SHOWS HER best face...
the most important THING is THAT she is with me...
The ideal wife for me is someone who I can trust even when I am blind. Someone who is capable to be my friend and my lover at the same time. Someone who is going to get along with my family, parents and friends. My future wife should be very peaceful, a person who can help me rising our children based in the principle of honest. I expect my wife to be a person who can advice me when I do something negative and congratulate when I do something positive. Finally I expect a wife who put our relationship above all.
ReplyDeletehelp me raise our children based on the principle of honesty
Deletewho can advise me when I do something wrong and congratulate me when I do something well.
I expect a wife who will put our relationship above all.
It sounds to me like you have a good head on your shoulders, Leni :D